Wrote this at the beginning of the lockdown. Was trying consciously to write a more chill, minimalist tune. I'd love to hear what you think of this
Thank you so much for that feedback! You're definitely right about making the words clearer. It's something I know I need to work on. For the past year, my focus had been mostly on vocals technique and proper breathing, so I think the pronunciation aspect has been ignored a bit. I'll hone in on that in the coming weeks.It's been fun following your music this year. You got your own thing going on with a big future ahead.
Get the mic closer on these home recordings. You have such a clear voice but I have trouble making out the actual words. I hate to throw off your concentration on your great singing, but make sure your lyrics are understood word by word.
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